I'm posting my answer to my homehork.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. smaller 2. bigger 3. more common 4. less 5. more clever 6. more narrow 7. more quickly 8. worse 9. better 10. either could be used here.
For a short time, i made my answer list. As soon as i saw this questions, it reminded me of my school life from middle to high school. acutually, most students studies English grammer like above things in his or her school. Of course, so do i.
Oh, plus, i'd like to fill in the blank with my mother's job which i didn't explain well to you. virtually, my mother has a short period of time in her job campared to my father's. You know, most countries are in bad shape now including my countries. Furthermore, their two sons, As me and my younger bother who are doing his militery service now has entered individual univercities. My parent didn't have any choice but to have a dual incomes to make up of our student's fee. So, she has started to go to the food factory. And she makes a special source like GO-CHOO-JANG and DOEN-JANG etc.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thank you for your doing your homework again. I greatly appreciate it. :)
And oh, thank you so much for sharing you mother\'s source of living.
I really admire you for being such a valued person.
I can say that you do appreciate both your parents very much just as I do.
Anyway, go over my corrections please. Have a great day [이름]!
Call you later! ^^
--Teacher Alice---
1. smaller
>> Correct.
2. bigger
>> Correct.
3. more common
>> either could be used here.
4. less
>> Correct.
5. more clever
>> either could be used here.
6. more narrow
>> narrower
7. more quickly
>> either could be used here.
8. worse
>> Correct.
9. better
>> Correct.
10. either could be used here.
>> quicker
For a short time, i made my answer list.
>> Correct.
As soon as i saw this questions, it reminded me of my school life from middle to high school.
>> When I read these questions, it reminded me of my school life from middle school to high school.
acutually, most students studies English grammer like above things in his or her school. Of course, so do i.
>> Actually, most students study English grammar in their school.
Of course, so do i.
>> Correct.
Oh, plus, i\'d like to fill in the blank with my mother\'s job which i didn\'t explain well to you.
>> I\'d like to talk more about my mother\'s job because I didn\'t explain it well to you.
virtually, my mother has a short period of time in her job campared to my father\'s.
>> My mother\'s working time is shorter compared to my father.
You know, most countries are in bad shape now including my countries.
>> You know, most countries are in bad shape now including my country.
Furthermore, their two sons, As me and my younger bother who are doing his militery service now has entered individual univercities.
>> Furthermore, their two sons who are training in the military now enrolled in different universities.
My parent didn\'t have any choice but to have a dual incomes to make up of our student\'s fee.
>> My parent didn\'t have any choice but to work so they can support our student\'s fee.
So, she has started to go to the food factory.
>>So she started going to the food factory.
And she makes a special source like GO-CHOO-JANG and DOEN-JANG etc.
>> And she makes special GO-CHOO-JANG, DOEN-JANG and etc.
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