I\'m punctual person, and being punctual is important.

2021-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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In social, our punctual is important. For example, I have a lecture at two o\'clock, because the questions in this lecture come out as a test tomorrow, but if I get up at 1:55, I will miss the lecture mabye 2:00 to 2:10. Then I will get a lower score. Also punctual is a important to me. If I don\'t go to school until 8:30 is over, then I have to give 1000won to my teacher. This examples mean punctual is very important to anyone, but I never done it, and I don\'t intend to do it, so I\'m a punctual person.

강사 첨삭

Hello Maria!

Being punctual is a must because it means that we respect other people\'s time and we value agreements specially when it comes to work or official engagements.

So always keep an early or exact time of your appointment and always stay prepared.

You did a very good essay!

See you soon.

-T. Donna =)

In social, our punctual is important. 
>> In social gatherings, punctuality is very important.

For example, I have a lecture at two o\'clock, because the questions in this lecture come out as a test tomorrow, but if I get up at 1:55, I will miss the lecture mabye 2:00 to 2:10. 
>> For example, if I have a lecture at 2 o\'clock, because the questions in this lecture will come out as a test tomorrow, but if I get up at 1:55 I will miss the lecture maybe at 2:00 to 2:10. 

Then I will get a lower score. Also punctual is a important to me. If I don\'t go to school until 8:30 is over, then I have to give 1000won to my teacher. 
>> Then I will get a lower score. Also punctuality is important to me. If I don\'t go to school until 8:30, then I have to give 1000won to my teacher. 

This examples mean punctual is very important to anyone, but I never done it, and I don\'t intend to do it, so I\'m a punctual person.
>>  These examples mean punctuality is very important to anyone. Some can be late but I have never done it, and I don\'t intend to do it, so I\'m a punctual person.

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