I'm really hacked off.
학생이 쓴 원문
You know I love Gattong Which is my lovely lovely car.
This morning when I was about to get into the car I was shocked.
Because her, my gattong, back mirror was broken.
Oh my god! What happened to her!
I nearly cried when I saw this.
Oh crap...Who did this?
Unfortunately, I [이름]ed out of [이름]ing lot last night.
Because it was late, there's no place to [이름].
So I cannot search any CCTV recording.
It's my fault. I should have [이름]ed her in designated area.
oh no...even I have no money to fix her.
In this case, I have to look for another part time job.
My part time job is good. Because I can take a payment in advance.
Please keep your fingers crossed for me.
강사 첨삭
Oh J!!! U am so sorry to hear about what happened to Gattong!!! That is terrible thinking how much you love and value your car…The person who did that to her was so bad…I hope you will be able to find a new part time job. I will pray for that, don’t worry. I hope Gattong will be fixed ASAP. Just keep your fingers crossed and I wish you good luck!!! AJA!!!Lei J
You know I love Gattong
>>correct
Which is my lovely lovely car.>>correctThis morning when I was about to get into the car I was shocked.>>correct
Because her, my gattong, back mirror was broken.>>Because her, my Gattong’s back mirror was broken.Oh my god! What happened to her!>>correctI nearly cried when I saw this.>>correctOh crap...Who did this?>>correctUnfortunately, I [이름]ed out of [이름]ing lot last night. >>Unfortunately, I [이름]ed outside the [이름]ing lot last night
Because it was late, there's no place to [이름].>>correctSo I cannot search any CCTV recording.>>correctIt's my fault. I should have [이름]ed her in the designated area.>>correctoh no...even I have no money to fix her.>>oh no…I don’t even have money to fix her.In this case, I have to look for another part time job.>>Because of this event, I have to look for another part time job.My part time job is good.
>>correct
Because I can take a payment in advance.>>correct
>>Because I am allowed to have a cash advancePlease keep your fingers crossed for me.
>>correct
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