I\'m satisfied with my life now

2024-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I\'m satisfied with my life now, so I don\'t have much talent I want to have. But if I can have talent or skills, I would like to have the ability to focus on one thing. I don\'t have concentration, so if I can have concentrate, I think I can studying or other things I don\'t want to do.

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름],

Great job on your homework! It\'s wonderful to hear that you are happy with your life. Wanting to improve your focus is a great goal. Keep working on it, and you will get better every day. You can do it!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I\'m satisfied with my life now, so I don\'t have much talent I want to have.

>>I’m satisfied with my life now, so there aren’t many talents I want to have.

But if I can have talent or skills, I would like to have the ability to focus on one thing.

>>But if I could have a talent or skill, I would like to have the ability to focus on one thing.

I don\'t have concentration, so if I can have concentrate, I think I can studying or other things I don\'t want to do.

>>I don’t have much concentration, so if I could concentrate, I think I could study or do other things I don’t want to do.

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