I\'m saving energy in two ways.
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The first is to turn off the power by pulling it out when there are several wires plugged into one outlet, and the second is to save water. First of all, unplugging the outlet is, sometimes in summer, a fan, a mobile phone charger, air conditioner, and other appliances are plugged into one outlet. I don\'t think this is very good. Secondly, since a lot of energy is used to make water, I think that you should save water. When taking a shower or drinking water and brushing your teeth.
P.S. The picture is in the Naver
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Good late evening Maria!
There are so many people who cannot control wasting resources which can actually save them a lot of money when controlled properly. You are right about conserving water and avoiding electric short circuits and spending 25% energy on plugged but unused appliances. We need to emphasize the importance of safety at the same time saving power and water so that there can still be something to use for tomorrow.
Excellent answer!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
First of all, unplugging the outlet is, sometimes in summer, a fan, a mobile phone char ger, air conditioner, and other appliances are plugged into one outlet.
>> Correct!
Or: First of all, unplugging the outlet is sometimes in summer, a fan, a mobile phone charger, air conditioner, and other appliances when plugged into one outlet.
I don\'t think this is very good.
>> Correct!
Secondly, since a lot of energy is used to make water, I think that you should save water.
>> Correct!
When taking a shower or drinking water and brushing your teeth.
>> When taking a shower or drinking water and brushing your teeth, we need to turn off the faucet.
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