i'm so sorry
학생이 쓴 원문
I was absent from our class
Because when class time , i had to talk with superior
I am so sorry ~
There were a lot of people in today's dinner
And they drunk much SOJU that is the alcohol of korea
I don't like to drink
So i pretened to drink alcohol when there was superior beside me
T_T
Anyway tommorrow, i will go to my house on time
And try to prepare next class
See you next time
Good night ^0^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I miss you in class. I\'ll see you then next time. :) Have a nice day!! :) Take care.
Here are my corrections:
I was absent from our class Because when class time , i had to talk with superior
>> I was absent in our class because I had to talk with my superior during the time of our class.I am so sorry ~>>Correct!There were a lot of people in today\'s dinner
>> There were a lot of people in our dinner tonight.
And they drunk much SOJU that is the alcohol of korea>> They drank too much Soju, an alcohol in Korea.
I don\'t like to drink So i pretened to drink alcohol when there was superior beside me >> I don\'t like to drink so I just pretended that I\'m drinking an alcohol whenever my superior was beside me.T_T Anyway tommorrow, i will go to my house on time >> T_T Anyway, tomorrow I will go home on time.
>> T_T Anyway, I will go home on time tomorrow.And try to prepare next class
>> And I will prepare for our next class.
>> And I will try to prepare for our next class.See you next time
>> Correct but don\'t forget the punctuation mark at the end of the expression.
>> See you next time! OR;
>> See you later! Good night ^0^
>> Goodnight! ^0^
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