i'm so sorry

2011-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erica

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I was absent from our class Because when class time , i had to talk with superior I am so sorry ~ There were a lot of people in today's dinner And they drunk much SOJU that is the alcohol of korea I don't like to drink So i pretened to drink alcohol when there was superior beside me T_T Anyway tommorrow, i will go to my house on time And try to prepare next class See you next time Good night ^0^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I miss you in class. I\'ll see you then next time. :) Have a nice day!! :) Take care.   Here are my corrections: I was absent from our class Because when class time , i had to talk with superior  >> I was absent in our class because I had to talk with my superior during the time of our class.I am so sorry ~>>Correct!There were a lot of people in today\'s dinner >> There were a lot of people in our dinner tonight. And they drunk much SOJU that is the alcohol of korea>> They drank too much Soju, an alcohol in Korea. I don\'t like to drink So i pretened to drink alcohol when there was superior beside me >> I don\'t like to drink so I just pretended that I\'m drinking an alcohol whenever my superior was beside me.T_T Anyway tommorrow, i will go to my house on time >> T_T Anyway, tomorrow I will go home on time. >> T_T Anyway, I will go home on time tomorrow.And try to prepare next class >> And I will prepare for our next class. >> And I will try to prepare for our next class.See you next time  >> Correct but don\'t forget the punctuation mark at the end of the expression. >> See you next time!  OR; >> See you later! Good night ^0^ >> Goodnight! ^0^    

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