I’m so sorry Kelly....

2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I thought that I could take our class today before my schedule, but situations are always changing, so I couldn’t spare slack time.. I know how sad when the class was cancelled as a teacher, so I wanted to take up your call and explain the situation on my voice. But, because of my poor English speaking, I failed to say what I want to say. (I’m so nervous actually at that time) What I intended to speak is that It is Okay to pretend we having a lesson, because we took a conversation and you could provide me some online feedback on the article!! I’m so sorry that I didn’t express that wellㅠㅠ I got an message that today class was canceled. I am worrying if my behavior gave you an any little harm....... I’m really sorrrry8ㅅ8 BTW I read the second article and again, I decided to lessen my smartphone using time^^ Last night(actually today), I fall my smartphone upon my face and it really hurts. The article said that falling smartphone means time to sleep.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you so much for your message. Anyway, you don\'t need to worry about your class yesterday. I totally understand your situation. If you cannot really study because of your hectic schedule, you can also put your classes on hold on the website. I know that you are also busy. So, smile and have a good day. I will see you again :)

~Kelly^^

I thought that I could take our class today before my schedule, but situations are always changing, so I couldn’t spare slack time..
>> I thought that I could take our class today before my schedule, but the situations are always changing, so I couldn’t spare the slack time. 
I know how sad when the class was cancelled as a teacher, so I wanted to take up your call and explain the situation on my voice.
>> As a teacher, I know how sad it is when a class is canceled, that\'s why I answered your call to explain my situation personally.
But, because of my poor English speaking, I failed to say what I want to say.

>> Correct.

(I’m so nervous actually at that time)

>> Actually, I was so nervous at that time.
What I intended to speak is that It is Okay to pretend we having a lesson, because we took a conversation and you could provide me some online feedback on the article!!
>> What I wanted to say was it was okay to pretend that we were having a lesson because I answered your call and you could provide me some feedback on the article.
I’m so sorry that I didn’t express that wellㅠㅠ

>> I\'m sorry because I could not express myself well.
I got an message that today class was canceled.

>> I got a message that today\'s class was canceled.
I am worrying if my behavior gave you an any little harm.......
>> I am worried if my behavior puts you in any trouble.
I’m really sorrrry8ㅅ8 BTW I read the second article and again, I decided to lessen my smartphone using time^^
>> I\'m really sorry. By the way, I read the second article; I decided to lessen the time that I use my smartphone.
Last night(actually today), I fall my smartphone upon my face and it really hurts. The article said that falling smartphone means time to sleep.

>> Last night (actually today), I dropped my smartphone on my face and it really hurts. The article mentioned that if you are dropping your phone on your face, it’s probably a sign that it’s time to put it down and get some sleep. 

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