I'm so surprised with my score
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I used to get the low score in connection with my speaking skills including voca, speaking, pronounciation, etc. Those were all 3. Sometime the one of them was score 4. I've been depressed with the previous socres since I started it.
But, today I've got awesome score. Most score was 4. Studying hard anywhere I go and stay make me more natural in speaking english. And It seem you help me improve my skils as well. I've decided to keep this atitude to be more fluent in speaking english.
I've undertood the flow of making sentenses in english. Do need to think about what I'm saying. The way to be more natural is just much practice. Sentences that I want to say should be made using my mouse not thinking about that. It is very a factor to be late to make some sentenses if I think how I can say things. So, I will try keep saying anythings that I want to say and anywhere I'm. I've had a confidence for me to be more fluent that this. This compositions also have me make sentenses and make me more natural to be more influent. It also help me improve my writting skills.
강사 첨삭
I\'m glad that you finally found out the best way for you to practice.
I\'m very happy that I have helped you improve your English as well. I noticed a significan change in your speaking skills so I think we\'re doing the right thing. Keep aiming high [이름]! ^^
T.Aurora
Actually, I used to get the low score in connection with my speaking skills including voca, speaking, pronounciation, etc.
>>Actually, I used to get low scores on my speaking skills as well as voca, pronunciation, etc.
Those were all 3.
>>My scores were all 3.
Sometime the one of them was score 4.
>>Sometimes, I get a score of 4 on one of them.
I\'ve been depressed with the previous socres since I started it.>>Cirrect!But, today I\'ve got awesome score.
>>But nowadays, I got an awesome score.
Most score was 4.
>>Most scores were 4.
Studying hard anywhere I go and stay make me more natural in speaking english.
>>Studying hard anywhere I go helps me speak English more naturally.
And It seem you help me improve my skils as well.
>>And it seems you helped me improve my skills as well.
I\'ve decided to keep this atitude to be more fluent in speaking english. >>Correct!I\'ve undertood the flow of making sentenses in english.
>>I\'ve understood the structure of making sentences in English.
Do need to think about what I\'m saying.
>>I don\'t need to think about what I\'m saying.
The way to be more natural is just much practice.
>>The way to be more natural is to practice a lot.
Sentences that I want to say should be made using my mouse not thinking about that.
>>Sentences that I want to say should be made using my mouth withough thinking too much.
It is very a factor to be late to make some sentenses if I think how I can say things.
>>I could be late in giving my answers if I think how I\'ll say things.
So, I will try keep saying anythings that I want to say and anywhere I\'m.
>>So I will try to keep saying anything that I want to say wherever I am.
I\'ve had a confidence for me to be more fluent that this.
>>I\'ve developed my confidence in becoming more fluent.
This compositions also have me make sentenses and make me more natural to be more influent.
>>This compositions also have me make sentences to help me be more fluent.
It also help me improve my writting skills.
>>It also helps me improve my writing skill.
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