i'm sorry.

2011-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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i heared again we're talked. i think my listeniing skill is so bad. how practice is the best?i'm wondering. anyway, it's on Friday,i think you're tired. because of various students like me. i'm afraid that don't definitely remember your family's members Twelve? i was good at memory something.but my military finished i wasn't good at memory, i guess because of Age. i had taugt many korean in military,i was a drillmaster. teaching isn't easy. especially students don't be aware teacher's mind. it's afriad it's also teacher responsibility. if rain were coming, Meal were wrong, weather were bad. everything is teacher's responsibility. i guess,you'r work is hard, but you're always optimistic calling me. anyway, cheer up.

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Hello [이름], HAPPY FRIDAY. Thank you for making your composition. Ok so this is my piece of advice, if you really want to improve your listening skill, try to watch a lot of American movies or TV programs and see if you can understand the movie or you can at least repeat a sentence or a line coming from the actors or actresses of that certain movie. Have a good weekend.Take care. T. Verna. Here are my corrections: i heared again we're talked. >>I listened to our conversation again.i think my listeniing skill is so bad. >>I think my listening skill is so bad.how practice is the best?i'm wondering. >>I'm wondering, what can I do to improve my listening skill?anyway, it's on Friday,i think you're tired. >>Anyway, today is Friday and I bet you're tired. because of various students like me. >>CORRECT.i'm afraid that don't definitely remember your family's members Twelve? >>I'm sorry, but I just want to clarify something. I do remember that you told me that you are 12 in your family. Am I right?i was good at memory something.but my military finished i wasn't good at memory, i guess because of Age. >>When I was at the military I had good memory but I guess it's declining due to aging. i had taugt many korean in military,i was a drillmaster. >>I had taught many Koreans in the military and I was their drill master.teaching isn't easy. especially students don't be aware teacher's mind. >>Teaching isn't easy specially when students don't understand what the teacher is thinking. it's afriad it's also teacher responsibility. >>But I'm afraid, it is still the responsibility of the teacher. if rain were coming, Meal were wrong, weather were bad. >>For example, it is raining, something is wrong with the meal and the weather is bad. everything is teacher's responsibility. >>Everything is the teacher's responsibility.i guess,you'r work is hard, but you're always optimistic calling me.>>I guess your work is hard, yet you always sound optimistic when we are talking. Anyway, cheer up. >> CORRECT.

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