I`m sorry about that

2013-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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I was preparing to recieve your call as soon as I had a breakfase after arriving at my office. Suddenly, my part leader was asked me to have a conversation on the 20 floors. So, I told you that today the study through the phone should be push back to tommorow. But, I talked to him so much with my visions and our part visions, which is going to prepare something that is surprising any clients. So I was very interested with that. I knew that I missed my chance to go to the Singarfor in order to attend some conferences because I`m a fresh researcher who don`t know anything about our procces. So, I was so sad. He told me that you will be given to go to other countries if you will be more responsible for our procces in 1 year. It seems that for work in other conturies a lot of knowleges on our process is needed at least 2 years career. I definitely decided to work hard to work in other conturies over and over again. As of now, I can write anything that I want to tell anybody except for some idioms. Don you think, so? In fact, I used to read and write a Unit of a book named "Gramma in Use, imediately" on my note every night on arriving at my home before going to bed asleep. These help me say and write anything that I want to say or write easier than the previous. I think the study throught the phone also can help me like those. With kind regards.

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It\'s really too bad that we weren\'t able to have our class today but then again you had to attend to more pressing matters. Yes, studying by phone could help you a lot especially on your speaking skills. You don\'t necesarilly have to use a lot of idioms on your sentences. Familiarize yourself with the easy idioms and work your way to more challenging idioms. ^^ Talk to you tomorrow. T. Aurora I was preparing to recieve your call as soon as I had a breakfase after arriving at my office. >>Correct! (spelling of \'recieve\' is \'receive\')Suddenly, my part leader was asked me to have a conversation on the 20 floors. >>Suddenly, my team leader asked me to have a conversation on the 20th floors. >>Suddenly, my assistant leader asked me to have a conversation on the 20th floors.So, I told you that today the study through the phone should be push back to tommorow.>>So that\'s why I told you to cancel today\'s class. >>So, I told you postpone today\'s class for tomorrow.But, I talked to him so much with my visions and our part visions, which is going to prepare something that is surprising any clients. >>But I talked to him so much about our visions which is going to surprise any clients.  So I was very interested with that. >>Correct!I knew that I missed my chance to go to the Singarfor in order to attend some conferences because I`m a fresh researcher who don`t know anything about our procces. >>I knew that I missed my chance to go to the Singarpore in order to attend some conferences because I`m a fresh researcher who doesn`t know anything about our procces.So, I was so sad. >>Correct!  He told me that you will be given to go to other countries if you will be more responsible for our procces in 1 year. >>He told me that I\'ll be sent to other countries if I will be more responsible to our process in 1 year.  It seems that for work in other conturies a lot of knowleges on our process is needed at least 2 years career. >>It seems that working in other countries requires a lot of knowledge abour our career. It needs at least 2 years in that same career.  I definitely decided to work hard to work in other conturies over and over again.>>I have decided to work hard so that I could work in other countries over and over again.As of now, I can write anything that I want to tell anybody except for some idioms. >>As of now, i can write anything I want to say except for some idioms.  Don you think, so? >>Correct! In fact, I used to read and write a Unit of a book named \"Gramma in Use, imediately\" on my note every night on arriving at my home before going to bed asleep. >>In fact, I used to read and answer some Units on the book named \"Grammar in Use, Intermediate\" every night upon arriving at my home before going bed. These help me say and write anything that I want to say or write easier than the previous. >>This help me say and write anything that I want to say or write better than the previous. I think the study throught the phone also can help me like those.>>I think that studying through the phone can also help me with those.With kind regards. >>Correct!

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