I'm sorry for a lot of tasks...

A nice Wednesday to you Cassandra!

Wow! I was impressed with the words you used in your essay.

I advise you to be careful with the tenses or the right word to use. ^^ 

Broaden your vocabulary skill and learn more new expressions that will help you express your ideas more.

I know you can do it! See you in class!
Teacher Nina

Before finishing original homework, I am going to end yesterday\'s one.

>> Before I finish my original homework, I am going to end my homework yesterday.

They spoke that it is very good thinking for our university students before hearing it is related to Japan.

>> Did you mean: They said that it is very good for the minds of university students to know that it is related to Japan.  ( Can you please explain this sentence in class. ^^)

They turned and criticized it is an attempt to make believers from pseudo religion.

>> Did you mean: They turned their back and criticized it as an attempt to make them believe in pseudo religion.  

I was seriously injured from this situation.

>> Correct 

But I overcome now thinking and thinking.

>> Did you mean: But I can overcome it and I am thinking about it seriously.

I am able to think it was a good experience, it was bitter though now.

>> I was able to realize that it was a good experience for me, I feel bitter though.

I can understand much more people deep in the heart who was injured from these kind of situation.

>> I can understand the people more who was injured because of this situation. 

>> OR: I can understand the better more who was injured because of this situation. 

A famous celebrity visited my university in order to give a lecture.

>> Correct 

He is a only one who announced to the public the true he is a gay in Korea. 

>> He was the only who announced in public that he is gay.

>> OR: He was the only person who announced his real identity in public. 

Korean are rather conservative, also in the liberty of love.

>> Koreans are conservative also in terms of love. 

He had been taking off in that moment nevertheless, became excluded, criticized and was not able to earn money for years.

>> He had been taking off that moment nevertheless, he was excluded, criticized and was not able to earn money for years. 

But now, he comeback successfully through thorough struggle and came in front of me.

>> But he came back in front of me successfully. 

I was able to empathize him and realized it was an useful experie

>> I was sympathized him and realized that it was a useful experience..