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There\'s no need to say sorry.

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Your ideas are accepted.

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See the corrections and suggestions to avoid same mistakes.

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It should help you.

It shouldn\'t make you feel bad.

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To writing about this question is very difficult.
>> To write about this question is very difficult.

>> OR: To write about this given idea is very difficult.

>> OR: Writing about this statement is very difficult.

There are many knowledge and many indirect experience.
>> There are many ways on how to gain knowledge and many indirect experiences.

But, a information of gained from books not give to a reader actually. 
>> However, the information gained from books doesn\'t actually give knowledge to a reader.

if i know methods of to love that i get during some books, I still feel like difficult to speak in front of a girl.
>> If I know the methods to find live that I get from some books, I will still feel difficult to speak in front of a girl.

there are only to supply a guide in order to living well.

>> They are there only to be guides in order to live well.