I'm sorry Juliet!

2014-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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I'm sorry for absent my class today. I could not use my voice. I have a terrible sore throat ㅠㅠ. And I already use all of my chance to delay my class. I'm sorry. Also, I may not be able to attend my class again. Tomorrow, I should register for my next semester. It is really important and really competitive because too many student pressed. So see you on Thursday. I'm sorry ㅠㅠ.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

I was hoping that you were just busy when you were not able to answer my call earlier but upon reading your email, I felt terrible. Don\'t worry about our class, we can continue our lesson on Thursday. Take a lot of rest and drink your  medicine so that you will feel better tomorrow. Good luck on your enrolment. Don\'t stress yourself too much because you\'re still not feeling well.

I\'ll see you soon then. Get well soon. Good night and I hope you will be well rested. :))

~T. Juliet ^^

I\'m sorry for absent my class today.

>> I\'m sorry if I was absent in class today.

>> OR: I\'m sorry if I was not able to attend class today.

OR>>I\'m sorry for being absent from class today.

I could not use my voice.

>> I do not have voice.

I have a terrible sore throat ㅠㅠ.

>> Correct!

>> OR: My throat really hurts.

And I already use all of my chance to delay my class.

>>Correct

OR>>And I already used all my cancellation privileges.

I\'m sorry.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I apologize for that.

Also, I may not be able to attend my class again.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I may not be able to attend again our class tomorrow.

Tomorrow, I should register for my next semester.

>> Tomorrow, I will be registering for next semester.

>> OR: Tomorrow, I will enroll for next semester.

It is really important and really competitive because too many student pressed.

>> It is really important for me to go tomorrow because there are many students who will be enrolling.

So see you on Thursday.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I will see you on Thursday then.

I\'m sorry ㅠㅠ.

>> Correct!

>> OR: I really apologize for that.

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