I\'m sorry to stop the class
학생이 쓴 원문
Shay, I think I don\'t have much time to study English recently. So I need to pause the classes. I\'m sorry that I can\'t take the class. I supposed to tell you during the class but I forgot taking my laptop to my hometown. I was sad because I had only taken classes without reviewing for a while. After the test,and after the Europe trip, I will come back! And at that time, I will try to review your feedback more!! Thank you Shay!! Hope you\'ve been good~
강사 첨삭
Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sending this message.
I appreciate it.
I understand. Don\'t worry!
Focus on your review.
I hope you get a good exam result.
Enjoy your stay in your hometown.
I\'ll see soon!
_T. SHAY^^
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Shay, I think I don\'t have much time to study English recently.
>>Shay, I think I don\'t have much time to study English now.
OR: Shay, I think I haven\'t had much time to focus on my review recently.
So I need to pause the classes.
>>Correct
OR: So I need to take a break from the classes.
I\'m sorry that I can\'t take the class.
>>Correct
OR: I\'m sorry I can\'t attend the class.
I supposed to tell you during the class but I forgot taking my laptop to my hometown.
>>I was supposed to tell you during the class, but I forgot to bring my laptop to my hometown.
I was sad because I had only taken classes without reviewing for a while.
>>I was sad because I had been taking classes without reviewing for a while.
After the test,and after the Europe trip, I will come back!
>>After the test and the Europe trip, I will come back!
And at that time, I will try to review your feedback more!!
>>Correct
OR: I\'ll make sure to review your feedback more when I return.
Thank you Shay!!
>>Thank you, Shay!
Hope you\'ve been good~
>>I hope you\'ve been good.
OR: I hope you\'ve been well.
Thank you for sending this message.
I appreciate it.
I understand. Don\'t worry!
Focus on your review.
I hope you get a good exam result.
Enjoy your stay in your hometown.
I\'ll see soon!
_T. SHAY^^
***
Shay, I think I don\'t have much time to study English recently.
>>Shay, I think I don\'t have much time to study English now.
OR: Shay, I think I haven\'t had much time to focus on my review recently.
So I need to pause the classes.
>>Correct
OR: So I need to take a break from the classes.
I\'m sorry that I can\'t take the class.
>>Correct
OR: I\'m sorry I can\'t attend the class.
I supposed to tell you during the class but I forgot taking my laptop to my hometown.
>>I was supposed to tell you during the class, but I forgot to bring my laptop to my hometown.
I was sad because I had only taken classes without reviewing for a while.
>>I was sad because I had been taking classes without reviewing for a while.
After the test,and after the Europe trip, I will come back!
>>After the test and the Europe trip, I will come back!
And at that time, I will try to review your feedback more!!
>>Correct
OR: I\'ll make sure to review your feedback more when I return.
Thank you Shay!!
>>Thank you, Shay!
Hope you\'ve been good~
>>I hope you\'ve been good.
OR: I hope you\'ve been well.
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