I`m starving right now

2016-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

you know what?? I`m seriously hungly since I skept my dinner. why? I thoght I have to lose weight,especially my belly. So, I made a bad decision. I`m going to buy instant nuddles and eat them before my class is started. Do you hanppen to know the instant nuddle 'Bul -dak - bbokum - myun'? It is severly hot, I mean really spicy. Once people eat it, They will have diarrhea netx day. Anyway I`m buying it. It`s is weird how come I sometimes want to have the really spicy nuddle, which I refered, even I know It is not good at all to body.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! ^.^ Happy Friday to you!   Thank you so much for this composition. Because of this, I\'m now craving for something spicy. :( Just kidding. :) I have made some modifications for you to review later on. Be very careful with your spelling. I\'ll see you in our class! ^_^//   _Teacher Mayleen ^^   you know what?? I`m seriously hungly since I skept my dinner. >> You know what? I\'m seriously hungry since I skipped my dinner.   why? I thoght I have to lose weight,especially my belly. >> Why? It\'s because of the thought of losing weight especially my belly fats. So, I made a bad decision. >> I think it\'s a bad decision. I`m going to buy instant nuddles and eat them before my class is started.>> I\'m going to buy instant noodles and eat them before having my class. Do you hanppen to know the instant nuddle \'Bul -dak - bbokum - myun\'? >> Do you happen to know the instant noodle \'Bul - dak - bbokum - myun\'? It is severly hot, I mean really spicy. >> It is severely hot. I mean to say, it\'s really spicy. Once people eat it, They will have diarrhea netx day.>> Once people eat it, they\'ll experience diarrhea the next day. Anyway I`m buying it. >> Correct! OR: I\'m still buying it. It`s is weird how come I sometimes want to have the really spicy nuddle, which I refered, even I know It is not good at all to body. >> It\'s weird that I sometimes want to eat spicy noodles, which I\'ve mentioned above, even when I know it\'s not good for the body.

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