I\'m sure people who have same blood have same characters.
학생이 쓴 원문
Blood type was inherited by parents.
When I had watched movie, I was shocked to death so I can\'t come to my mind.
Blood is come out when our blood vessel is destructed.
We often cut our skin by sharp things like glass or bottle.
I should be careful of it.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]. Excellent job in sharing your thoughts through writing and it\'s also a great practice to improve your skills. ^_^
I\\\'m sure people who have same blood have same characters.
>>>I\'m sure people who have the same blood have the same characters.
Blood type was inherited by parents.
>>>A blood type was inherited from parents.
When I had watched movie, I was shocked to death so I can\'t come to my mind.
>>> When I watched a movie, I was shocked to death that I couldn\'t recover.
Blood is come out when our blood vessel is destructed.
>>>Blood comes out from our body when blood vessels are punctured.
We often cut our skin by sharp things like glass or bottle.
>>>We often cut our skin with sharp objects like glass or bottles.
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