I\'m teacher. So...
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m teracher. So I had many chance to advise to students. Everytime I did it, I tried to give constructive advice or criticism. Fortunately, until now my children - students followed my advice and criticism well. At that case, I can feel worthy of this job.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ju [이름]. Thank you once again for making time to do your homework despite your busy schedule. I appreciate it. Constructive criticism is taken easier and it is great that you give it to your students. I hope you have a good weekend. ~Teacher Jane
I\'m teracher.
>> I am a teacher.
So I had many chance to advise to students.
>> So I have many chances to advise students.
Every time I did it, I tried to give constructive advice or criticism.
>> Every time I did I tried to give constructive advice or criticism.
Fortunately, until now my children - students followed my advice and criticism well.
>> Fortunately until now my children or students follow my advice and take criticism well.
At that case, I can feel worthy of this job.
>> In that case, I feel worthy of this job.
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