i\'m tired..................

2021-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Vance

학생이 쓴 원문

huuuuuu.........I\'m tired now... why? umm because I did online class. I saw light monitor during 6 hour. It is so tired. but today\'s online class was good. That because I felt, time was fast and I fell as good as go to school. but I want to go to school really. It is better than online class! good night friends!~~~~

강사 첨삭

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

I did online class
>>I had an online class. 

I saw light monitor during 6 hour
>> I was in front of the monitor for six hours.

 It is so tired.
>> It is so tiring. 

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