i\'m tired..................
학생이 쓴 원문
I had online class today.It was difficult and tired to listen online class during 6 hour...
Monday\'s school plan divide 6 class.
1. Technology & Home
2. Science
3. Korean
4. moral
------Lunch Time------
5. Sports club. (I belong Basket Ball club.)
6. English
It is tired me. but efforts make perfect.
I will be a good person!
As hard as it is, there is a reward!!!!!!!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Monday\'s school plan divide 6 class.
I had online class today.
>>I had an online class today.
It was difficult and tired to listen online class during 6 hour...
>>It was difficult and tiring to listen my online classes during those 6 hours...
Monday\'s school plan divide 6 class.
>>Monday\'s school plan is divided in 6 classes.
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