I'm too free today.

2011-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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That's why I'm feeling insecure now. Yesterday, I couldn't know that time flew because I was so busy. but I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked. I want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend. but I can't. My boss didn't give me some work. However he passed by beside my desk. And he seemed to glance at what I did. I'm with a yawn several times. But I can endure this. I'll go home in an hour :D and Today is the last day of weekday. Really happy Friday~ How lovely it is..kkk

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], While I'm reading your composition I feel like yawning too. I felt the boredom in it. Haha! Enjoy your weekend! -Tiny^0^   That's why I'm feeling insecure now. >>correctYesterday, I couldn't know that time flew because I was so busy. >> Yesterday, I didn't know that time flew because I was so busy. but I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked. >> But I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked. >>correctI want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend. but I can't. >> I want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend, but I can't. My boss didn't give me some work. >>correctHowever he passed by beside my desk. >> However he passed by my desk. >> However he passed beside my desk. And he seemed to glance at what I did. >>correctI'm with a yawn several times. But I can endure this. >> I'm yawning several times but I can endure this. I'll go home in an hour :D >>correctand Today is the last day of weekday. >> Today is the last day of weekday. Really happy Friday~ How lovely it is..kkk >> Really a happy Friday! How lovely it is?kkk

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