I'm too free today.
학생이 쓴 원문
That's why I'm feeling insecure now.
Yesterday, I couldn't know that time flew because I was so busy.
but I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked.
I want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend.
but I can't.
My boss didn't give me some work.
However he passed by beside my desk.
And he seemed to glance at what I did.
I'm with a yawn several times.
But I can endure this.
I'll go home in an hour :D
and Today is the last day of weekday.
Really happy Friday~ How lovely it is..kkk
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
While I'm reading your composition I feel like yawning too.
I felt the boredom in it. Haha!
Enjoy your weekend!
-Tiny^0^
That's why I'm feeling insecure now.
>>correctYesterday, I couldn't know that time flew because I was so busy.
>> Yesterday, I didn't know that time flew because I was so busy.
but I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked.
>> But I haven't done anything today like the first day I worked.
>>correctI want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend.
but I can't.
>> I want to do another things like internet shopping or writing letter to my friend, but I can't.
My boss didn't give me some work.
>>correctHowever he passed by beside my desk.
>> However he passed by my desk.
>> However he passed beside my desk.
And he seemed to glance at what I did.
>>correctI'm with a yawn several times. But I can endure this.
>> I'm yawning several times but I can endure this.
I'll go home in an hour :D
>>correctand Today is the last day of weekday.
>> Today is the last day of weekday.
Really happy Friday~ How lovely it is..kkk
>> Really a happy Friday! How lovely it is?kkk
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