I'm trying~

2011-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Geiz

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello~My teacher 비앙카~~^^* I was difficult the class of today. because I didn't understand sometimes. but my teacher had a senseful and kind. so I'll try.

강사 첨삭

Good day my dear [이름]! ^^ It's a lovely day, and I hope you could start it with a smile! Thank you for this composition! Read on and check my corrections! ^^ _Bianca_   I'm trying~ >>Correct! >>Though for titles, be able to capitalize the first letter of every noun: I'm Trying~ Hello~My teacher 비앙카~~^^* >>Correct!I was difficult the class of today.because I didn't understand sometimes. >>The class today was difficult because I didn't understand some things.but my teacher had a senseful and kind. so I'll try. >>My teacher though is sensitive and kind so I'll try.

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