I'm trying~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello~My teacher 비앙카~~^^*
I was difficult the class of today.
because I didn't understand sometimes.
but my teacher had a senseful and kind.
so I'll try.
강사 첨삭
Good day my dear [이름]! ^^
It's a lovely day, and I hope you could start it with a smile!
Thank you for this composition!
Read on and check my corrections! ^^
_Bianca_
I'm trying~
>>Correct!
>>Though for titles, be able to capitalize the first letter of every noun: I'm Trying~
Hello~My teacher 비앙카~~^^*
>>Correct!I was difficult the class of today.because I didn't understand sometimes.
>>The class today was difficult because I didn't understand some things.but my teacher had a senseful and kind. so I'll try.
>>My teacher though is sensitive and kind so I'll try.
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