I'm trying my patience.

2011-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

I've typed all at first and there were too many letters. At that time, my ipod was out of charge and turned out without saving anything. And I'm trying to type again. Have you seen Hanbok? This is the Korean traditional cloth and has so beautiful lines and colores. I've seen foreign people who were attracted to Hanbok. Hanbok has been changed to the convenient style for a long time. But we hardly wear it aside from on special days like our wedding day, our parents' 60th birthday and Korean holidays. So I forgot the last time I've worn Hanbok. But I seem to know the next time. It will be when I marry someone. Anyway it's not real thing I want to tell you. There was a big issue on Hanbok recently. I'll be back to my next composition. -_-)b << it's the terminater you already know :)

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Finally our favorite day! Yeah, I knew Hanbok already. I think it is one of the common questions that I’ve asked my Korean friends before. Though I haven’t really worn one I’ve seen people who wore them already. Korean who celebrates with us here, wears it to showcase your national custome. The “terminator” is really funny. ^-^kk -Tiny^0^ I've typed all at first and there were too many letters. >>correctAt that time, my ipod was out of charge and turned out without saving anything. >> At that time, my ipod was out of battery and turned off without saving anything. >> At that time, my ipod drained and turned off without saving anything. And I'm trying to type again. >>correctHave you seen Hanbok? >>correctThis is the Korean traditional cloth and has so beautiful lines and colores. >>spelling check: colors >> This is the Korean traditional cloth and has so beautiful lines and colors. I've seen foreign people who were attracted to Hanbok. >>correctHanbok has been changed to the convenient style for a long time. >> Hanbok has been changed to a convenient style for a long time. But we hardly wear it aside from on special days like our wedding day, our parents' 60th birthday and Korean holidays. >> But we hardly wear it aside from special days like our wedding day, our parents' 60th birthday and Korean holidays.So I forgot the last time I've worn Hanbok. >> So I’ve forgotten the last time I've worn Hanbok. But I seem to know the next time. >>correctIt will be when I marry someone. >>correctAnyway it's not real thing I want to tell you.>> Anyway it's not the real thing I want to tell you.There was a big issue on Hanbok recently. >>correctI'll be back to my next composition. -_-)b << it's the terminater you already know :) >>spelling check: terminator >> I'll be back to my next composition. -_-)b << It's the terminator you already know. :)

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