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So sorry, I was in my granparent's house during holidays and I couldn't get in touch with techology...jeje
In not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during the Seollal.
Lunar New Year,known as Seol-nal is one of Korea's major holiday. Since a fraction of the population still live in their hometown, most of the koreans head to their home these days. Also, I take a bus to go to my hometown, Gangneong. I usually come bearing gifts. Nobody wants to meet their parents empty-handed. When all relatives round up, we visit our ancestral tumb to pay respect. We perform the traditional rite thorough food offerings and special bowing,Geol. To prepare all the foods, women have to cooked for a whole day at least. It has long been a women's duty. This holiday we eat Ddeokguk, which bestows one year to our age(we regard that when we eat this soup, we finally get one year) I remember I wanted to get older I tried to eat as many soup as I can when I was young.
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A full week without technology, I\'m surprised you survived. I hope you didn\'t eat much over the holiday. It would be hard to get rid of that holiday pounds. It seems cooking and preparing for the holidays will be your dury too in the future. I hope you\'re prepared for it. I\'m sure it\'ll be hard but you can always find joy in the faces of those loved ones who enjoy the food you prepared. Speak later!
T. Aurora
So sorry, I was in my granparent\'s house during holidays and I couldn\'t get in touch with techology...jeje>>So sorry, I was at my grandparent\'s house during the holidays and I couldn\'t get in touch with technology...jejeIn not more than 5 sentences, tell me about your possible activities in Korea during the Seollal.Lunar New Year,known as Seol-nal is one of Korea\'s major holiday.
>>Lunar New Year,known as Seol-nal is one of Korea\'s major holidays.
Since a fraction of the population still live in their hometown, most of the koreans head to their home these days.
>>Since a fraction of the population still live in their hometown, most Koreans head to their home these days.
Also, I take a bus to go to my hometown, Gangneong.
>>Correct!
I usually come bearing gifts.
>>Correct!
Nobody wants to meet their parents empty-handed.
>>Correct!
When all relatives round up, we visit our ancestral tumb to pay respect.
>>When all relatives are round up, we visit our ancestral tomb to pay respect.
We perform the traditional rite thorough food offerings and special bowing,Geol.
>> We perform the traditional rite through food offerings and special bowing called Geol.
To prepare all the foods, women have to cooked for a whole day at least.
>>Correct!
It has long been a women\'s duty.
>>It has long been a woman\'s duty.
>>It has long bee a duty for women.
This holiday we eat Ddeokguk, which bestows one year to our age(we regard that when we eat this soup, we finally get one year) I remember I wanted to get older I tried to eat as many soup as I can when I was young.
>>This holiday we eat Ddeokguk, which bestows one year to our age(we regard that when we eat this soup, we finally get a year older) I remember I wanted to get older so I tried to eat as much soup as I can when I was young.
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