I'm upset.

2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I washed my car a few days ago. At that, I was happy. I felt as if I had owned a new car. Today, I take a car for I go to work. Before I start a car, I saw advertisement- paper of opening store. I disembarked to clean it. But, there are much spain on the spot. I want to call to that store. But, I supressed.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ayshe! It's too bad that your car got dirty again after working so hard to clean it. Just hope that the paint or stain is not permanent. If you let yourself to be upset for a long time, you will look ugly (kkk) so just laugh it out or smile. ^^  Smile Always, Teacher Karen Here are my corrections: I'm upset. >>CORRECT I washed my car a few days ago. >>CORRECT At that, I was happy. I felt as if I had owned a new car. >>With that, I was happy. It felt as if I owned a new car. Today, I take a car for I go to work. >>Today, I am taking the car to work. Before I start a car, I saw advertisement- paper of opening store. >>Before I started it, I saw a paper advertisement about a store opening on my car. I disembarked to clean it. >>I got out of the car to remove it. But, there are much spain on the spot. >>But there is much paint/stain on the spot. I want to call to that store. >>I wanted to call that store. But, I supressed. >>But I suppressed. (BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPELLING.) >>But I contained/refrained myself from doing so.

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