I'm very happy to rest

2013-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We have to set up our equipment. 2. The _setup_ that you have here is quite nice. 3. Let's get together some day. 4. Let's get together someday this week. 5. Pick up your books. 6. I'll come get you in my pickup. ( = truck) 7. He may be the best student in class. 8. maybe he doesn't understand us. 9. Let's go to the beach. 10. He always lets me borrow his books. When I have a free time, I feel free. I ate dinner with junior officers. Noodle what we ate is very spicy and we have no choice but drink water constantly. now I'm in my room. I turned on airconditioner. It's like l'm in winter place. I love our science skill which makes our life better. good night teacher.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you so much for always doing your homework! I hope that you will have enough rest because you might be busy tomorrow. Can you tell me about what activities do you usually do during your free time? Do you like watching movies? Tell me about it in class. Please go voer the corrections I gave you.See you tomorrow! Take Care!Teacher Nina 1. We have to set up our equipment. >> Correct!2. The _setup_ that you have here is quite nice. >> Correct!3. Let\'s get together some day. >> someday4. Let\'s get together someday this week. >> some day 5. Pick up your books. >> Correct!6. I\'ll come get you in my pickup. ( = truck) >> Correct!7. He may be the best student in class. >> Correct!8. maybe he doesn\'t understand us. >> Correct!9. Let\'s go to the beach. >> Correct!10. He always lets me borrow his books.>> Correct!When I have a free time, I feel free. >> Correct! OR >> When I have a spare time, I feel free.I ate dinner with junior officers. >> I ate dinner with my junior officers.Noodle what we ate is very spicy and we have no choice but drink water constantly. >> The noodle that we ate waas very spicy, we didn\'t have any choice but to drink water constantly.now I\'m in my room. I turned on airconditioner. >> Now, I\'m in my room, I turned on the airconditioner.It\'s like l\'m in winter place. >> It\'s like I\'m in a winter place.I love our science skill which makes our life better. >> I love our Science skills which makes our life better.good night teacher. >> Good night teacher.

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