I'm very happy to rest!
학생이 쓴 원문
1)mother has done the shopping.
2) Walter didn't fly to Rome, he flies to Venice.
3) did you recycle inkjet cartridges?
4) don't drink and drive.
5) When does the first lesson start?
6) Yesterday Rick did forget his homework.
7) What have you done with your money, Jack?
8) Last week we did write a test.
9) did Amy come to school by bike this morning?
10) Have you ever done anything silly?
I like sunny day. I think It should be corrected to "liked".
now, l like rainy day. because when whether is rainy, I can rest!!!
It means I can receive same money with less work!
wow!! it's amazing!! don't you agree ??
Once rain comes, I can earn money with no work.
but I should do my best my job!
I am the officer.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thank you for sending this in.^^ You did a pretty nice job! I am so proud of you that you always do your best in class. Please go over the corrections I provided for you. If you have any questions, please tell me in class. I agree with you. I am so happy that you will have less work. You can take a lot of rest. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Nina
1)mother has done the shopping.
>> Correct
>> OR: My mother has done the shopping. 2) Walter didn\'t fly to Rome, he flies to Venice.
>> Walter doesn\'t fly to Rome, he flies to Venice. 3) did you recycle inkjet cartridges?
>> Do you recycle inkjet cartridges? 4) don\'t drink and drive.
>> Correct! [Check: Capitalization^^]5) When does the first lesson start?
>> Correct!6) Yesterday Rick did forget his homework.
>> Yesterday Rick didn\'t forget his homework. 7) What have you done with your money, Jack?
>> Correct!8) Last week we did write a test.
>> Last week we didn\'t write a test. 9) did Amy come to school by bike this morning?
>> Correct! [Check: Capitalization^^]10) Have you ever done anything silly?>> Correct!I like sunny day.
>> Correct!
I think It should be corrected to \"liked\".
>> I think it should be corrected to \"liked\".now, l like rainy day. because when whether is rainy, I can rest!!!
>> l like rainy day now because when is it is raining, I can rest!!!It means I can receive same money with less work!
>> It means that I can receive the same amount of money with less work!wow!! it\'s amazing!! don\'t you agree ??
>> Correct!
>> (Remember to capitalize the first letter on your sentence.)Once rain comes, I can earn money with no work.
>> Once the rain comes, I can earn money without working.but I should do my best my job!
>> But I should do my best at work.I am the officer.
>> I am an officer.
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