I'm very happy, today!!
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Hi [이름]!
I'm looking forward to talk to you too!:) I missed you!:) Talk to you later!!!:)
Hi teacher~~^^*
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Most of all, i'm really expecting to meet you, now.
>>>Most of all, i'm really expecting to meet you now.
I have some things which make me happy, today!!
>>>I have some things which made me happy, today!!
Of course, some things include in you.^^
>>>Of course, some of these things include you.^^
And i got summer vacation bonus from my boss.hehehe
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Actually, i just have worked in the company for two weeks.
>>>Actually, i have just worked in the company for two weeks.
Also i'm a part time worker. But, my boss gave to me some bonus.
>>>Also, i'm a part time worker. But, my boss gave to me some bonus.
That makes me very happy.
>>>That makes me very happy.
Lastly, my close friends will come back to Korea in this weekend.
>>>Lastly, my close friends will be coming back to Korea this weekend.
They are in the Philippines now.
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Anyway, i will meet them next week.^^
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So, i'm really excited now.
I'm waiting for your class.^^
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See you later~~
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