I'm with carolyn in cafe.
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Hello there [이름]!
You are really amazing! You surprised me with your homework.
I appreciate that you still do it even though you have a hectic schedule.
Carolyn is so blessed to have you. I hope that your relationship will last long.
Please share more about this in class. Kindly go over the corrections below.
See you on Monday!
Teacher Nina
1. There are a lot of people here.
>> Correct!
2. There is much to do before the party.
>> Correct!
3. It is much hotter today than it was yesterday.
>> Correct!
4. You\'re going to be in a lot of trouble.
>> Correct!
5. I told her much more than I should have.
>> Correct!
6. We haven\'t gotten much of a response to our advertisement.
>> Correct!
7. There were a lot of desks in the classroom.
>> Correct!
8. He made much money trading stocks.
>> a lot of
9. We have much to discuss.
>> Correct!
10. We have a lot of topics to discuss
>> Correct!
I\'m in cafe with carolyn.
>> I\'m in a cafeteria with Carolyn.
We ordered yogurt icecream and I paid it.
>> We ordered yoghurt ice cream and I paid for it.
It is not cheap but I\'d like to buy it.
>> It was not cheap but I\'d like to buy it.
When I\'m with carolyn, It is no matter how much money I should pay.
>> When I\'m with Carolyn, it doesn\'t matter how much money I spend.
>> OR: When I\'m with Carolyn, money is not important.
It is important to me that I\'m with carolyn!!
>> It is important for me to be with Carolyn.
In thesedays, carolyn get my clothes and took on as if It belongs to her.
>> These days, Carolyn get my clothes and take it as if it belongs to her.
but Im happy to with her.
>> I\'m happy to be with her.
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