I'm with carolyn in cafe.

2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. There are a lot of people here. 2. There is much to do before the party. 3. It is much hotter today than it was yesterday. 4. You're going to be in a lot of trouble. 5. I told her much more than I should have. 6. We haven't gotten much of a response to our advertisement. 7. There were a lot of desks in the classroom. 8. He made much money trading stocks. 9. We have much to discuss. 10. We have a lot of topics to discuss I'm in cafe with carolyn. We ordered yogurt icecream and I paid it. It is not cheap but I'd like to buy it. When I'm with carolyn, It is no matter how much money I should pay. It is important to me that I'm with carolyn!! In thesedays, carolyn get my clothes and took on as if It belongs to her. but Im happy to with her.

강사 첨삭


Hello there [이름]!

You are really amazing! You surprised me with your homework.

I appreciate that you still do it even though you have a hectic schedule.

Carolyn is so blessed to have you. I hope that your relationship will last long.

Please share more about this in class. Kindly go over the corrections below.

See you on Monday!
Teacher Nina


1. There are a lot of people here. 

>> Correct!
2. There is much to do before the party. 

>> Correct! 
3. It is much hotter today than it was yesterday. 

>> Correct! 
4. You\'re going to be in a lot of trouble. 

>> Correct! 
5. I told her much more than I should have. 

>> Correct! 
6. We haven\'t gotten much of a response to our advertisement. 

>> Correct! 
7. There were a lot of desks in the classroom. 

>> Correct! 
8. He made much money trading stocks. 

>> a lot of
9. We have much to discuss. 

>> Correct! 
10. We have a lot of topics to discuss

>> Correct! 

I\'m in cafe with carolyn.

>> I\'m in a cafeteria with Carolyn.
We ordered yogurt icecream and I paid it.

>> We ordered yoghurt ice cream and I paid for it.
It is not cheap but I\'d like to buy it.

>> It was not cheap but I\'d like to buy it.
When I\'m with carolyn, It is no matter how much money I should pay.

>> When I\'m with Carolyn, it doesn\'t matter how much money I spend.

>> OR: When I\'m with Carolyn, money is not important.
It is important to me that I\'m with carolyn!!

>> It is important for me to be with Carolyn.
In thesedays, carolyn get my clothes and took on as if It belongs to her.

>> These days, Carolyn get my clothes and take it as if it belongs to her.

but Im happy to with her.

>> I\'m happy to be with her.

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