I made my plan for today

2014-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.He is so vain. He likes to talk about ___ all the time. himself 2. Jane? Yes, I spoke to ___ last week. her 3. Her brother? Yes, she told me all about ___. him 4. You really have to respect ___. yourself 5. They talk about us, but they don't really know ___. us 6. Some actors love ___ too much. themselves 7. Are you going to invite ___ to the concert? her 8. Goodbye! Take care of ___! yourself 9. You have to tell ___ what happened. them 10. I was at home by ___. (Noone else was with me.) myself I made my plan for today. I am satisfied because I achieved most of the plan. but Studying about new one is difficult and needs lot of time. I think my boss want me to be a specialist. umm... I should work more. So I will go to work early in the morning.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again [이름]!

Congratulations! You got a perfect score!

I think this homework was a peace of cake for you!

Keep it up! I hope that you will have a great day tomorrow.
See you tomorrow!

Teacher Nina

1.He is so vain. He likes to talk about ___ all the time.

himself

>> Correct!

2. Jane? Yes, I spoke to ___ last week.

her

>> Correct!

3. Her brother? Yes, she told me all about ___.

him

>> Correct!

4. You really have to respect ___.

yourself

>> Correct!

5. They talk about us, but they don\'t really know ___.

>> Correct!

6. Some actors love ___ too much.

themselves

>> Correct!

7. Are you going to invite ___ to the concert?

her

>> Correct!

8. Goodbye! Take care of ___!

yourself

>> Correct!

9. You have to tell ___ what happened.

them

>> Correct!

10. I was at home by ___. (Noone else was with me.)

myself

>> Correct!

I made my plan for today.

>> I made a plan today.

I am satisfied because I achieved most of the plan.

>> I am satisfied because I achieved most of the things on my plan.

>> OR: I feel satisfied because most of the things on my plan was achieved.

but Studying about new one is difficult and needs lot of time.

>> But studying a new one is difficult and it needs a lot of time.

I think my boss want me to be a specialist.

>> I think my boss wants me to be a specialist.

umm... I should work more.

>> Correct!

So I will go to work early in the morning.

>> Correct!

>> OR; I will go to work early tomorrow morning.

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