I make a game!! What can I do??
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When I make a game, What cna I do??
First I make a game's title. Then I make a subject. Example RPG, ADVENTURE, PHANTAGE ... Game's subject is very many. Then I make a character like sword, bowman, wizard ... Character is many,too. Next, I make a map. A prime example
dungeon. And I make a monster, level and strong or weak ... Wow, Make game is very difficult.
Oh, this is game maker's. And next, I make for gamers.
First make a game site. Then game guide, Q&A, update, key, event, notice board... Ok then we are finish. HURRAH!!!
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Good morning!
Thank you so much for today. I think creating a game is difficult. I like your ideas so hopefully, you can do it in the future and become successful! If you\'re gonna ask me, RPG is very popular nowadays, you can also put different characters in the game. So why not put a swordsman, a bowman and a wizard together in one game? Dungeons are okay, but I think it\'s too common already. Why not the outer space? Or underwater? Or in a different dimension imaginable? I think that\'s cool. Anyway, please check out the corrections I made below. Be careful with your spelling, okay? Take care and have a great day!
When I make a game, What cna I do??
>>When I create a game, what will I do?First I make a game\'s title.
>>First, I have to think of the game\'s title.
Then I make a subject. Example RPG, ADVENTURE, PHANTAGE ... Game\'s subject is very many.
>>Then I have to create a theme, for example, RPG, adventure, fantasy, etc. There are many themes for a game.
Then I make a character like sword, bowman, wizard ... Character is many,too.
>>Then, I have to create a character, like a swordsman, a bowman, a wizard, there are a lot of characters too.
Next, I make a map.
>>Next, I will make a map.
>>Next, I will design a map.
A prime example dungeon.
>>A prime example would be a dungeon.
And I make a monster, level and strong or weak ... Wow, Make game is very difficult.
>>I\'ll also create monsters of different levels, either strong or weak. Wow, making a game is difficult.Oh, this is game maker\'s.
>>Oh, this are for game makers.
And next, I make for gamers.>>Next, I have to design it for gamers.First make a game site.
>>First, I have to make a game website.
Then game guide, Q&A, update, key, event, notice board...
>>Then a game guide, Q&A, updates, keys, events, notice board, etc.
Ok then we are finish. HURRAH!!!
>>Okay then we\'re finished, hurrah.
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