I manage stress in my life
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I manage stress in my life, but it\'s very very strange.
If I have a stress,[First]I will get rid of stress as a hobby,
If I have a stress, [Secend](That\'s the way I use it the most) ( It\'s strange)
It is!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................................................................................................................................................................................................just! stay..... THE END ( HOW IS IT???)>.< +.+
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I do not understand how you manage your stress! hahah
>> I manage my stress in my life well, but it\'s very very strange.
If I have a stress,[First]I will get rid of stress as a hobby,
>> If I am stressed, first, I will get rid of it using my hobby.
If I have a stress, [Secend](That\'s the way I use it the most) ( It\'s strange)
>>It is strange because I do not feel it all the time.
It is!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................................................................................................................................................................................................just! stay..... THE END ( HOW IS IT???)>.< +.+
>> That is the end. What do you think about it?
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