I met Carolyn last Friday

2014-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello teacher~! It was fabulous weekand~! what are you doing now? I'm at a digital book room in the library. Oh~ don't worry about me because it is ligal to write this article in here. You know that I have only one way to submit my homework through Wifi of my cell phone which makes it possible to connect internet. So I need a lot of internet packit and it has limitted capacity. I need another way to submit my homework and finally i found this way! Today, I want to submit my homework as many as possible. and I will borrow some books from this library. I want to be a wise person! Carolyn is on a TOEIC test. I bring her a testing place. I really hope that she get a good score. If she get a score more than 750, she will get a incentive about her promotion. So I always do my best when she need a help about English. and I believe that you will help us too! thank you! have a nice weekand teacher~!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It\'s nice that you are having a great weekend. You\'re really sweet! Carolyn is so happy and I\'m sure about that. Hihihi! I hope that Carolyn will get a great score too. Of course! I\'ll always be here to help you both. You amazed me. You are going to read a lot of books. Keep it up! Talk to you soon. Teacher Nina   Hello teacher~! >> Correct! It was fabulous weekand~! >> It\'s a fabulous weekend. ( spelling check: weekend ^^) what are you doing now? >> Correct! I\'m at a digital book room in the library. >> Correct! Oh~ don\'t worry about me because it is ligal to write this article in here. >> Oh! Don\'t worry about me because it is legal to write an article here. (spelling check: legal ^^) You know that I have only one way to submit my homework through Wifi of my cell phone which makes it possible to connect internet. >> You know that I only have one way to submit my homework and it is through wifi which makes it possible for me to connect to the internet. >> OR: You know that I only have one way to submit my homework using my cellphone and it is through wifi. So I need a lot of internet packit and it has limitted capacity. >> Did you mean: So I need to have a strong internet cignal and my cellphone is only limited. I need another way to submit my homework and finally i found this way! >> Correct! Today, I want to submit my homework as many as possible. and I will borrow some books from this library. >> Today, I want to submit as many as possible homework I can and I will borrow some books in this library. I want to be a wise person! >> Correct! Carolyn is on a TOEIC test. >> Carolyn is having her TOIEC test. I bring her a testing place. >> I brought her to the testing place. >> OR: I gave her a ride to the testing place. I really hope that she get a good score. >> I really hope that she\'ll get a good score. If she get a score more than 750, she will get a incentive about her promotion. >> Did you mean: If she will get a score more than 750, she will get an additional incentive. >> OR: If she will get a score higher than 750, she will be promoted. So I always do my best when she need a help about English. >> So I always do my best when she needs help about English. and I believe that you will help us too! >> Correct! thank you! >> Correct! have a nice weekand teacher~! >> Correct! ( spelling check: weekend ^^)

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