I met Carolyn last Friday
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher~!
It was fabulous weekand~!
what are you doing now?
I'm at a digital book room in the library.
Oh~ don't worry about me because it is ligal to write this article in here.
You know that I have only one way to submit my homework through Wifi of my cell phone which makes it possible to connect internet. So I need a lot of internet packit and
it has limitted capacity. I need another way to submit my homework and finally i found this way!
Today, I want to submit my homework as many as possible. and I will borrow some books from this library. I want to be a wise person!
Carolyn is on a TOEIC test. I bring her a testing place.
I really hope that she get a good score. If she get a score more than 750, she will get a incentive about her promotion. So I always do my best when she need a help about English. and I believe that you will help us too!
thank you! have a nice weekand teacher~!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It\'s nice that you are having a great weekend.
You\'re really sweet! Carolyn is so happy and I\'m sure about that. Hihihi! I hope that Carolyn will get a great score too. Of course! I\'ll always be here to help you both.
You amazed me. You are going to read a lot of books.
Keep it up! Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
Hello teacher~!
>> Correct! It was fabulous weekand~!
>> It\'s a fabulous weekend. ( spelling check: weekend ^^) what are you doing now?
>> Correct! I\'m at a digital book room in the library.
>> Correct! Oh~ don\'t worry about me because it is ligal to write this article in here.
>> Oh! Don\'t worry about me because it is legal to write an article here. (spelling check: legal ^^) You know that I have only one way to submit my homework through Wifi of my cell phone which makes it possible to connect internet.
>> You know that I only have one way to submit my homework and it is through wifi which makes it possible for me to connect to the internet.
>> OR: You know that I only have one way to submit my homework using my cellphone and it is through wifi.
So I need a lot of internet packit and it has limitted capacity.
>> Did you mean: So I need to have a strong internet cignal and my cellphone is only limited.
I need another way to submit my homework and finally i found this way!
>> Correct! Today, I want to submit my homework as many as possible. and I will borrow some books from this library.
>> Today, I want to submit as many as possible homework I can and I will borrow some books in this library.
I want to be a wise person!
>> Correct! Carolyn is on a TOEIC test.
>> Carolyn is having her TOIEC test.
I bring her a testing place.
>> I brought her to the testing place.
>> OR: I gave her a ride to the testing place. I really hope that she get a good score.
>> I really hope that she\'ll get a good score.
If she get a score more than 750, she will get a incentive about her promotion.
>> Did you mean: If she will get a score more than 750, she will get an additional incentive.
>> OR: If she will get a score higher than 750, she will be promoted.
So I always do my best when she need a help about English.
>> So I always do my best when she needs help about English.
and I believe that you will help us too!
>> Correct! thank you!
>> Correct!
have a nice weekand teacher~!
>> Correct! ( spelling check: weekend ^^)
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