I met my friends.

2011-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I planed to take advertising class. But the advertising class was cancelled. So I met my boyfriend and married couple friends, and ate hot source chicken in a bar. The bar name is 'hullalla'. in a long time,i had a good time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Susan! Thank you for making a composition. I am happy to know that you had a great time yesterday. Hope you are well rested today. See you in class! - T.Faye -   Here are your corrections: I planed to take advertising class. >>I planned on taking an advertising class.But the advertising class was cancelled. >>Correct!So I met my boyfriend and married couple friends, and ate hot source chicken in a bar. >>So I went to meet my boyfriend and my friends who are married, and we ate Chicken with hot sauce in a bar.The bar name is 'hullalla'. >>The bar's name is Hullalla. in a long time,i had a good time. >>I haven't had a good time in a long time.

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