I met my friends.
학생이 쓴 원문
I planed to take advertising class.
But the advertising class was cancelled.
So I met my boyfriend and married couple friends, and ate hot source chicken in a bar.
The bar name is 'hullalla'.
in a long time,i had a good time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Susan!
Thank you for making a composition. I am happy to know that you had a great time yesterday. Hope you are well rested today. See you in class!
- T.Faye -
Here are your corrections:
I planed to take advertising class.
>>I planned on taking an advertising class.But the advertising class was cancelled.
>>Correct!So I met my boyfriend and married couple friends, and ate hot source chicken in a bar.
>>So I went to meet my boyfriend and my friends who are married, and we ate Chicken with hot sauce in a bar.The bar name is 'hullalla'.
>>The bar's name is Hullalla.
in a long time,i had a good time.
>>I haven't had a good time in a long time.
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