I met The most interesting person
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in busan two years ago.
I travel in busan, at that time. and I stay in guest house at night
then I met him. he lived in seoul and he was a barista.
so he is close with me. because I was a barista too.
and suddenly, he suggest me to get into the sea.
but i refuse his suggest. so i saw him instead of that.
and next day, i had a breakfast with him in the morning.
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I travel in busan, at that time. and I stay in guest house at night
then I met him. he lived in seoul and he was a barista.
so he is close with me. because I was a barista too.
and suddenly, he suggest me to get into the sea.
but i refuse his suggest. so i saw him instead of that.
and next day, i had a breakfast with him in the morning.
then I met him. he lived in seoul and he was a barista.
so he is close with me. because I was a barista too.
and suddenly, he suggest me to get into the sea.
but i refuse his suggest. so i saw him instead of that.
and next day, i had a breakfast with him in the morning.
>> I met the most interesting person in Busan two years ago.
I traveled in Busan at that time and I stayed in a guest house.
I met him there at night. He lived in Seoul and was a barista.
So he was close to me because I was a barista too.
And he suddenly suggested to go to the sea but I refused it.
So I just saw him off instead of going.
The next day, I had breakfast with him in the morning.
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