I miss 2022…
학생이 쓴 원문
The three things I learned the most this school year are study, love and friendship. This is because I studied hard while attending an academy for the first time this year, and as I watched my friends break up with their sweethearts, I also started having unrequited love, and became closer with my friends. The most memorable activity of this school year was when I went to Lotte World at school. I really enjoyed playing with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Good effort! Thank you for doing your best in this homework. These sentences were very nice. However, there were some sentences which I placed some alternatives on. Please review the placement of words and how I created the pattern of each sentences. Make sure to take note of them. Have a great day ahead!
- Teacher Raven
The three things I learned the most this school year are study, love and friendship.
>> The three things I\'ve learned the most this year were study, love, and friendship.
This is because I studied hard while attending an academy for the first time this year, and as I watched my friends break up with their sweethearts, I also started having unrequited love, and became closer with my friends.
>> It\'s correct. However, you need to separate the first sentence until \"...for the first time this year.\" and \"As I watched my friends...\"
The most memorable activity of this school year was when I went to Lotte World at school.
>> The most memorable activity of this school year was when I went to Lotte World for a school trip.
I really enjoyed playing with my friends.
>> Correct.
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