I missed the bus to go home 2
학생이 쓴 원문
1) you how are old = how old are you
2) in is that English what = what is that English
3) how are you = how are you
4) is where teacher your where is your teacher
5) Gerry late why is = why is Gerry late
6) why are upstairs you = why are you upstairs
7) where my pencil case is = where is my pencil case
8) the children why are late = why are the children late
9) home his sister is when = when is his sister home
I ordered potato pizza which is steadly sold.
Of course I like it most. My junior officer waited for me and pizza.
We decided to stay his room until reaching out tomorrow.
there are about 4 hours to midnight, we enjoyed our time with searching internet,
playing movies and seeing cartoon.
Which I remember is the story about movie. but I'll tell you next time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]^^Thank you for always doing your homework. Don\'t forget the to capitalize the words and use the correct punctuation marks for your sentences. It is really important. I haven\'t tried potato pizza yet. We don\'t have that in the Philippines. Hahaha. Let us talk more about food in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
1) you how are old = how old are you
>> Correct!
>> OR: How old are you? (Don\'t forget the punctuation marks.^^.)2) in is that English what = what is that English
>> What is that in English? 3) how are you = how are you
>> Correct!4) is where teacher your where is your teacher
>> Correct!5) Gerry late why is = why is Gerry late
>> Correct!6) why are upstairs you = why are you upstairs
>> Correct!7) where my pencil case is = where is my pencil case
>> Correct!8) the children why are late = why are the children late
>> Correct!9) home his sister is when = when is his sister home>> Correct!I ordered potato pizza which is steadly sold.
>> I ordered potato pizza which is steadily sold.
>> OR: I ordered potato pizza which is regularly sold.Of course I like it most.
>> Of course, I like it the most.
My junior officer waited for me and pizza.
>> My junior officer waited for me and the pizza.We decided to stay his room until reaching out tomorrow.
>> We decided to stay in his room until tomorrow.there are about 4 hours to midnight, we enjoyed our time with searching internet,playing movies and seeing cartoon.
>> There were about four hours until midnight, we enjoyed our time searching the internet, watching movies and cartoons.Which I remember is the story about movie. but I\'ll tell you next time.
>> Did you mean: I will remember the story of the movie and I will tell it you next time.
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