I missed the bus to go home 2

2013-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1) you how are old = how old are you 2) in is that English what = what is that English 3) how are you = how are you 4) is where teacher your where is your teacher 5) Gerry late why is = why is Gerry late 6) why are upstairs you = why are you upstairs 7) where my pencil case is = where is my pencil case 8) the children why are late = why are the children late 9) home his sister is when = when is his sister home I ordered potato pizza which is steadly sold. Of course I like it most. My junior officer waited for me and pizza. We decided to stay his room until reaching out tomorrow. there are about 4 hours to midnight, we enjoyed our time with searching internet, playing movies and seeing cartoon. Which I remember is the story about movie. but I'll tell you next time.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]^^Thank you for always doing your homework. Don\'t forget the to capitalize the words and use the correct punctuation marks for your sentences. It is really important. I haven\'t tried potato pizza yet. We don\'t have that in the Philippines. Hahaha. Let us talk more about food in class. See you! Teacher Nina 1) you how are old = how old are you >> Correct! >> OR: How old are you? (Don\'t forget the punctuation marks.^^.)2) in is that English what = what is that English >> What is that in English? 3) how are you = how are you >> Correct!4) is where teacher your where is your teacher >> Correct!5) Gerry late why is = why is Gerry late >> Correct!6) why are upstairs you = why are you upstairs >> Correct!7) where my pencil case is = where is my pencil case >> Correct!8) the children why are late = why are the children late >> Correct!9) home his sister is when = when is his sister home>> Correct!I ordered potato pizza which is steadly sold. >> I ordered potato pizza which is steadily sold. >> OR: I ordered potato pizza which is regularly sold.Of course I like it most. >> Of course, I like it the most. My junior officer waited for me and pizza. >> My junior officer waited for me and the pizza.We decided to stay his room until reaching out tomorrow. >> We decided to stay in his room until tomorrow.there are about 4 hours to midnight, we enjoyed our time with searching internet,playing movies and seeing cartoon. >> There were about four hours until midnight, we enjoyed our time searching the internet, watching movies and cartoons.Which I remember is the story about movie. but I\'ll tell you next time. >> Did you mean: I will remember the story of the movie and I will tell it you next time.

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