I missed the bus to go home

2013-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. Let's have some toast. I'll get the bread and knife. 2. I'll mail a copy to you if you send me your name and address. 3. I'm hungry for a snack. Let's have some milk and cookies. 4. It's a semi-formal party. You have to wear a suit and tie. 5. How do you like your coffee? With cream and sugar? last Friday, I went to my room quickly, Because of schedule of bus which goes to my hometown. I was on vacation on Monday but I wanted to feel more comfortable in home. I checked the bus and I thought I was ready to go home. My luggage was already packed and I drove my car to bus terminal. I accomplished to park my car where parking pee wasn't charged. I thought almost things were going right. But I mistook initial parts, I misunderstood the time schedule. I didn't have any choice but go to base. and I answered your call. I tried to express this situation, but it is not so easy. Anyway, I go straight to Domino Pizza which is my favorite Pizza shop.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름]^^ It\'s really a happy Tuesday for me because you got a perfect score! Congratulations! I think the homework was really easy, am I right? Good job on your essay! I\'m sorry to hear about that, the good thing was you were able to eat your favorite pizza. I envy you! Hahaha. You are always doing your best in class. I am so proud of you. Don\'t give up! Just keep your ideas flowing and enjoy learning. See you tomorrow! Take Care! Teacher Nina 1. Let\'s have some toast. I\'ll get the bread and knife. >> Correct! 2. I\'ll mail a copy to you if you send me your name and address. >> Correct! 3. I\'m hungry for a snack. Let\'s have some milk and cookies. >> Correct! 4. It\'s a semi-formal party. You have to wear a suit and tie. >> Correct! 5. How do you like your coffee? With cream and sugar?>> Correct! last Friday, I went to my room quickly, Because of schedule of bus which goes to my hometown. >> Last Friday, I went to my room quickly because of the schedule of the bus which goes to my hometown. >> OR: Last Friday, I rushed into my room because I was thinking of the schedule of the bus which goes to my hometown. I was on vacation on Monday but I wanted to feel more comfortable in home. >> I was on vacation last Monday but I wanted to feel more comfortable at home.I checked the bus and I thought I was ready to go home. >> Correct!My luggage was already packed and I drove my car to bus terminal. >> My luggage was already packed and I drove my car to the bus terminal. >> OR: My luggage was already set and I drove my car to the bus terminal.I accomplished to park my car where parking pee wasn\'t charged. >> I accomplished to park my car where parking fee wasn\'t charged. >> OR: I was able to park my car where there\'s no charge.I thought almost things were going right. >> Did you mean: I thought that most things were going right. >> OR: I thought everything was turning our right.But I mistook initial parts, I misunderstood the time schedule. >> Did you mean: But I mistook the initial parts, I misunderstood the schedule of the bus.>> OR: I had a mistake, I misunderstood the schedule of the trip going to my hometown.I didn\'t have any choice but go to base. and I answered your call. >> I didn\'t have any choice but to go back to the base and I answered your call. I tried to express this situation, but it is not so easy. >> I tried to express this situation but it was not easy. >> OR: I tried to tell you the situation but it wasn\'t easy. Anyway, I go straight to Domino Pizza which is my favorite Pizza shop. >> Anyway, I went straight to Domino Pizza which is my favorite pizza shop. >> OR: Anyway, I went straight to Domino Pizza which is my favorite pizza parlor.

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