I missed your call...

2012-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Trisha

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I'm sorry Teacher Trisha. I missed your call. My cellphone was not working temporary. Now it is working well. But I feel sorry for our losing conversation. Moreover I feel sorry I couldn't hear your bright voices. It can't be helped. Have a nice weekend, see you Monday~~

강사 첨삭

Hi there, well I am truly sorry too for missing our talk, but I hope that your phone will be ok on our next class so we can have a very cheerful conversation once again! I hope you do have a nice weekend, have a nice time and see you, take care always! =) -Teacher Trisha =) I\'m sorry Teacher Trisha. >>> CorrectI missed your call. My cellphone was not working temporary. >>>I missed your call. My cellphone is not working at the moment. >>>OR I missed your call. My cellphone is temporarily not working.Now it is working well. >>> Correct >>> OR: Now, it is working well. But I feel sorry for our losing conversation. >>> But I feel sorry for losing our conversation. >>> OR: But I feel sorry for missing our talk.Moreover I feel sorry I couldn\'t hear your bright voices.>>> Moreover I feel sorry I couldn\'t hear your bright voice. (Thanks~!)It can\'t be helped.>>> CorrectHave a nice weekend, see you Monday~~ >>> Correct

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