I must follow the time flows.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have seen those kinds of facts in the movie like as superman or so.
I like to watch a movie in these time of holiday.
Stop time flowing makes man think twice of his life.
I havn\'t think about that.
I am used to watch that penomenon in the movie.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
You were able to give your ideas through writing and you did a wonderful job. Keep improving your writing and grammar skills. ^_^
I must follow the time flows.
>>>I must follow the flow of time.
I have seen those kinds of facts in the movie like as superman or so.
>>>I have seen those kinds of facts in movies like superman or so on.
I like to watch a movie in these time of holiday.
>>>I like to watch a movie these times of holiday.
Stop time flowing makes man think twice of his life.
>>>Stopping the flow of time makes a man think twice of his life.
I havn\'t think about that.
>>>I haven\'t thought about that.
I am used to watch that penomenon in the movie.
>>>I am used to watch that phenomenon in a movie.
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