I need correction on followed sentences.

2013-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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In this exhibition, I displayed 7 photos and abandoned objects in the broken bathroom of the complex cultural space, Ccuull in Seoul. ( I had the exhibition in the bathroom.) Hwa has multiple meaning in Korean : anger, blossoming and becoming

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Hi [이름]!Thank you for always trusting me in class. I appreciate the compositions you send for further correction. Anyway, great job for this time since you made your statements perfect! You didn\'t incur mistakes but of course, I want you to do thorough practice that will enhance your skills further. I\'ll see you later then and keep safe! Have a wonderful day ahead! ~~ T. Abby ~~ In this exhibition, I displayed 7 photos and abandoned objects in the broken bathroom of the complex cultural space, Ccuull in Seoul. >> Correct ( I had the exhibition in the bathroom.)>> Correct! Hwa has multiple meaning in Korean : anger, blossoming and becoming >> Correct OR> Hwa has multiple meaning in Korean, these are \'anger\', blossoming\', and \'becoming\'. 

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