I need corrections on a followed sentence.
학생이 쓴 원문
Two video works : Three rhythms for my dream, a heartless conductor
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!Thank you for giving your time to compose this.
Anyway, good that you are always doing well anyhow, I\'d like you to be more cautious of your grammar.
Try to learn more words as well to have several choices in your sentences.
Have more time reading to learn more grammar rules which can help you broaden what you know now.
Anyway, I\'ll see you in class. Keep safe and enjoy the day ahead!
~ T. Abby ~
I need corrections on a followed sentence.
>> I need a correction on the statement below.
OR> I need a correction on the following sentence:
Two video works : Three rhythms for my dream, a heartless conductor
>> Two videos work: Three rhythms for my dream, a heartless conductor
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