I need corrections on followed sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I did collective works with the artist, Jeong Yuhee as the team named ‘Air and Air’ since 2011 and this installation is the one of our collective works. We tired to represent possible danger that cannot be easily recognized while people stay at home. Audiences could look around the symbolic furnitures that we made.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
It sounds interesting..
I hope that my corrections still reflect exactly what you mean..
If you have questions, please ask me in class..
~ T. Abby ~
I did collective works with the artist, Jeong Yuhee as the team named ‘Air and Air’ since 2011 and this installation is the one of our collective works.
>>I have done collective works with the artist, Jeong Yuhee, as the team named \"Air and Air\" since 2011 and this installation is one of our collective works.
We tired to represent possible danger that cannot be easily recognized while people stay at home.
>>We tried to present possible dangers that are not easily recognized while people stay at home.
OR> We pointed out some potential dangers that are present at every home which are not recognized.
Audiences could look around the symbolic furnitures that we made.
>>Correct!
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