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I have done collective works with the artist, Jeong Yuhee, as the team named "Air and Air" since 2011 and this installation is one of our collective works. I regard this team as an experiment about communication because we’ve never reached same conclusion to make collective art works. However, I remembered that how we tired to persuade and understand each other. Through the work, +HOUSE-, I realized that my partners feel anxiety while she is staying home because she thought that comfort of a house interrupt her concentration of thinking. I tried to feel empathy while we were making these symbolic furnitures. We didn’t draw lines around art works so that audiences could approach closely and look around freely in this house. My room consisted of various objects. As I knew well their positions, I used them unconsciously. Because of their connected positions that I had made, I imagined my room as a natural environment where all organics effact each other. I tried to represent this imagination through these fictional photographs.

Hi there [이름]!Thank you for constructing this composition. Anyway, I salute you for this. You made minimal flaws. I know that you\'re getting better with your skills though there\'s always room for improvement. Never stop practicing and always have the eagerness to explore in English. Keep up the good work! See you later and have a wonderful day ahead! ~~ T. Abby ~~ I have done collective works with the artist, Jeong Yuhee, as the team named \"Air and Air\" since 2011 and this installation is one of our collective works. >> Correct  I regard this team as an experiment about communication because we’ve never reached same conclusion to make collective art works. >> Correct  However, I remembered that how we tired to persuade and understand each other. >> However, I can remember how we tried to persuade and understand each other.  Through the work, +HOUSE-, I realized that my partners feel anxiety while she is staying home because she thought that comfort of a house interrupt her concentration of thinking. >> Through the work HOUSE, I realized that my partner feel anxiety while she was staying home because she thought that the comfort of the house interrupted her concentration of thinking.  I tried to feel empathy while we were making these symbolic furnitures. >> Correct  We didn’t draw lines around art works so that audiences could approach closely and look around freely in this house. >> We didn\'t draw lines around these art works so that the audiences could approach closely and look around freely in the house. My room consisted of various objects. >> Correct  As I knew well their positions, I used them unconsciously. >> As I knew their positions well, I used them unconsciously. Because of their connected positions that I had made, I imagined my room as a natural environment where all organics effact each other. >> Because of the connected positions I made, I imagined my room as a natural environment where all organics affect each other.  I tried to represent this imagination through these fictional photographs. >> Correct