I need corrections on the following sentences.

I would like to take a course, the MFA in Fine Art at Goldsmiths because of the comprehensive programs it offers. The video works are connected to URL, https://vimeo.com/812212

Hi there [이름]!Thank you for giving a time to do even just a short composition. Just take note of the proper usage of words in your sentences. Be cautious of the right usage of verb tenses and be-verbs used as well as prepositions. Anyway, great job! I know that in no time, you\'ll be a lot better with your skills!See you later and enjoy your day ahead! Keep safe! ^_^ ~~ T. Abby ~~ I would like to take a course, the MFA in Fine Art at Goldsmiths because of the comprehensive programs it offers. >> I would like to take the MFA at Goldsmiths because of the comprehensive programs it offers. OR> I would like to take Master of Fine Arts in Goldsmiths because of the comprehensive programs it offers. The video works are connected to URL, https://vimeo.com/812212 >> Correct