I need corrections on the following sentences.

2013-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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I also expect to learn wide range of technologies by studying in Fine Art Media in the MFA programs of the Slade. For example, workshops and tutorials for learning analogue and digital technologies will help me to produce images with proper technics.

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Hello there [이름]! Good evening to you. Thank you for sending in your composition. I just want you to focus on the words you use in your sentences. Know their proper usage so as to avoid confusions. Here are my corrections and I hope I was able to help. You can also ask me during our class. ^^ Have a great day! See you later and keep safe! ~T. Abby~ I also expect to learn wide range of technologies by studying in Fine Art Media in the MFA programs of the Slade. >> I also expect to learn wide range of technologies by studying Fine Arts Media in the MFA programs of Slade. >> I am also expecting to learn an extensive range of technology upon studying Fine Arts media, which is an MFA program of Slade. For example, workshops and tutorials for learning analogue and digital technologies will help me to produce images with proper technics. >> For example, attending workshops and tutorials of analogue as well as digital technology will help me produce images with proper techniques. 

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