I need corrections on the following sentences.

-While practicing art, I think about what I’ve missed and ignored, and try to find ways to reconstruct the missing point. -I used my dream and my cat as sources of my artwork. Those are common parts of daily life but produce rhythmical flows involving in my life with their unpredictable qualities. -Maybe my trial to catch a moment of coincidence is related to the reason why people still hold religious belief and spend their time in praying. I feel relieved that there are still uncomprehended parts are remained and I think this fact vitalizes my life. -I think I have something common with the artist, Gabriel Orozco. I like his simple and humorous gesture on found object and plentiful poetry qualities his art works involved. I also like artist named Tobias Putrih. I saw his exhibition in Korea last year and I was impressed to see how he reconstructed his childhood memory of the hometown through a sensuous installation. When I saw his exhibition, I passed through dark space relying on carefully arranged illuminations and encountered the deliberate structure that he made when I turned corners. That was very effective.

Hi [이름]!  I hope your doing good and feeling better now! I was impressed with your sentences and word usage. The words you used was incredibly awesome. ^^  Good job for that! A few mistakes were noted and I underlined some words for you to easy notice them.  I suggest you to go over with your composition. I have provided the most suitable correction for every mistake, :)  In English we do not use uncomprehended, this word is not in the American English dictionary. Instead of using uncomprehended we use uncomprehending.  Thank you very much for the effort. It is well appreciated. ~~T. Abby~~-While practicing art, I think about what I’ve missed and ignored, and try to find ways to reconstruct the missing point. >> While I was practicing art, I thought about what I\'ve missed and ignored. I also try to find ways to reconstruct the missing point.-I used my dream and my cat as sources of my artwork. Those are common parts of daily life but produce rhythmical flows involving in my life with their unpredictable qualities. >> I used my dream and cat as a source for my artwork. Those are the common parts of my daily life that produce rhythmical flows with unpredictable qualities.-Maybe my trial to catch a moment of coincidence is related to the reason why people still hold religious belief and spend their time in praying.  >> Maybe a trial to catch a moment of coincidence is related to the reason why people still hold on religious belief and spend their time in praying.  I feel relieved that there are still uncomprehended parts are remained and I think this fact vitalizes my life.  >> I feel relieved that there are still uncomprehending parts that remained and I think this fact vitalized my life. -I think I have something common with the artist, Gabriel Orozco.  >>CORRECT!  OR> I think Gabriel Orozco and me has something in common.  I like his simple and humorous gesture on found object and plentiful poetry qualities his art works involved.  >> I like his simple and humorous gesture on found objects and plentiful poetry qualities of art works.  I also like artist named Tobias Putrih. I saw his exhibition in Korea last year and I was impressed to see how he reconstructed his childhood memory of the hometown through a sensuous installation. >> I also like the artist named Tobias Putrih. I saw his exhibit in Korea last year and I was impressed to see how he reconstructed his childhood memory of his hometown through a sensuous installation.  When I saw his exhibition, I passed through dark space relying on carefully arranged illuminations and encountered the deliberate structure that he made when I turned corners. >> When I saw his exhibit, I passed through a dark space carefully relying on arranged illuminations and when i turned to the corner I encountered a deliberate structure that he made.  That was very effective. >> CORRECT!  OR> It was very effective.