I need to make a plan for time management

Dear [Name],

A fantastic Friday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for making your composition and sharing things about you! ^^

Anyway, I think you really need to plan on how you will manage your time while working.

It won\'t be that easy, but you can do it! ^^

Aja! ^^,

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^.

See you on Monday! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Yesterday, I drop my wife off in front of her office and I was working at Home.
>> Yesterday, I dropped my wife off in front of her office, and I worked at home.

I have though that It doesn\'t matter where I work.
>> I have thought that it didn\'t matter where I worked.

But I was wrong.

>> But, I was wrong.

>> OR: However, I was wrong.

>> OR: I have thought that it didn\'t matter where I worked, but, I was wrong.

I didn\'t focus on the tesk.

>> I didn\'t focus on my tasks.

I whached TV, took a rest more, had a nap.
>> I watched TV, took a lot of rest and had some nap.

So, I am working at coffe shop, today.
>> So, I worked at a coffee shop today.

>> OR: Therefore, I worked at a coffee shop today.

>> OR: I watched TV, took a lot of rest and had some nap, so, I worked at a coffee shop today.

I could concerntrate my tesk.

>> I could concentrate on my tasks.

but It has a problem too.
>> But, there was a problem too.

>> OR: I could concentrate on my tasks, but, there was a problem too.

I couldn\'t focus on the phone conference when i got the phone from headquters.
>> I couldn\'t focus on the conference call when I got the phone from the headquarters.

Because here is a litte laud with music.
>> Because, here is a little loud due to the music.

>> OR: I couldn\'t focus on the conference call when I got the phone from the headquarters, because here was a little loud at that time due to the music.

I need to make a plan for working time management.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I need to make a plan to manage my time while working.