I need to start my school life from February!

2026-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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First, I need to prepare events such as graduation and orientation in February. Because I\'m a member of student council this year. So the members of student council and I will meet our professors, and plan how to celebrate graduate and host orientation. Second, I need to start writing a master\'s thesis. Actually I hope to meet my supervisor this week, but her schedule didn\'t match with [이름]e. Maybe I can meet my supervisor easily during the semester :( So I try to draft a master\'s thesis next holiday, the Korea Lunar Year.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

I am happy to see you here on the composition page once again. Indeed, moving forward to a better life through your academic advancement is one of the greatest decisions you have done last year.
Stay laser-focused and manage the risks of every step of your way.

Hosting an event means you are extremely keen about details of each part. In addition, you have to stay highly flexible for any last [이름]ute [이름]es.

Regarding your master\'s thesis, I am the worst person to give an advice since I studies two master\'s courses and never wrote [이름]e. ^^

Study carefully all the underlined parts of your sentences. They contain suggestions benefcial for your mastery.

Thank you for your composition submission. I will be so glad to see you here more often.

See you soon again.

-T. Donna~

First, I need to prepare events such as graduation and orientation in February. Because I\'m a member of student council this year.
So the members of student council and I will meet our professors, and plan how to celebrate graduate and host orientation.
>>> First, I need to prepare for events such as graduation and orientation in February because I\'m a member of student council this year.
So the members of student council and I will meet our professors, and plan how to celebrate the graduates and host an orientation.

Second, I need to start writing a master\'s thesis.
Actually I hope to meet my supervisor this week, but her schedule didn\'t match with [이름]e.
Maybe I can meet my supervisor easily during the semester :(
So I try to draft a master\'s thesis next holiday, the Korea Lunar Year.
>>> Second, I need to start writing a master\'s thesis.
Actually, I hope to meet my supervisor this week, but her schedule didn\'t match [이름]e.
Maybe I can meet my supervisor easily during the semester :(
So I will try to draft a master\'s thesis next holiday, the Korea Lunar Year.

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