I need to talk you something

2013-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi~ teacher Kelly~ I am sorry to say I have to change the class time because my work time is changed I can't study with you~ㅜㅜ but I would like to call you~ can i have your facebook account or your phone number? I am so sorry~ I will see you later this summer season~ take care~ bye from your student [이름]~

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]! It\'s sad that we won\'t be having class anymore, but I totally understand. Just send me a message. Take care and good luck.

---Teacher Kelly----

Hi~ teacher Kelly~

>> Correct.

 I am sorry to say I have to change the class time

>> I\'m sorry to inform you that I have to change my class time.

because my work time is changed

>> Because my work time has changed.

I can\'t study with you~ㅜㅜ

>> Correct.

but I would like to call you~

>> Correct.

can i have your facebook account or your phone number?

>> Correct.

>>Here\'s my email address Sir-- [이메일] 

I am so sorry~
>> Correct.

I will see you later this summer season~

>> Correct.

take care~

>> Correct.

bye

>> Correct.

from your student [이름]~

>> Correct.

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