I need your help!!
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to. 204(this is room nmuber)
we are discussing about circumstance of this aisle, especially some of small, things like laundry, food, the terrible running-shoes. So I said, it's not a problem of specific room and we need to take care of here circumstance with together. however you don't need to be worry of this. it's just common topic.
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Hi Richard,
I’m glad to see this onboard. Check it out ^^
Take care,
T. Connie
to. 204(this is room nmuber)we are discussing about circumstance of this aisle, especially some of small, things like laundry, food, the terrible running-shoes. So I said, it's not a problem of specific room and we need to take care of here circumstance with together. however you don't need to be worry of this. it's just common topic.
>> We are always discussing about the circumstances in this aisle, actually these are just simple things like the laundry, food, and the terrible smell of the running or rubber shoes. It’s a problem that the specific rooms should attend to and we should also do the maintenance together. It’s just a common and normal problem for us.
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